Friday, July 26, 2019

Winter

We are learning to use juicy verbs. personification. adjectives and similes.
I enjoyed brainstorming all the ideas.
I found it tricky to describe the noun.
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Outside still beautiful snowy mountains awakened in front of me. Cool calm air filled my lungs making me  shiver. Grass was so damp and frosty that mud squished between my shoes.  Winter makes me feel happy cold and I would like to see it snow at school


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2 comments:

  1. Tessa RoddenJuly 26, 2019 at 3:36 PM

    That’s awesome Lochie, winter is a fun time of year

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  2. LynneJuly 31, 2019 at 4:32 PM

    Just reading your writing makes me feel cold Lochie, brrr great writing

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